Saturday, 18 June 2011

RESERVED


Here is my first ever poem.. I had written it long back. Thought to share it with everyone. Please do give your views and suggestions.



She was the one who left me alone
and that's the reason my soul is blown.

My spirit is broken n my eye contains tear,
But I still wish that we were near.

She hates me a lot and that I know,
But I love her so much I can't let her go.

My brain is screwed and my heart is in pieces
But I pray for her and make many wishes.

I hope that she might find what she deserved
There is a vacant place in my heart that says 'RESERVED'.

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18 comments:

  1. Abdul Jawwad Rehmani18 June 2011 at 23:58

    kya baat hai, didnt know my brother was a poet.. kahin se chori ti nahi ki na.. warna copyright infringment ka case ho jayega....!!!!!

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  2. Ajvad R19 June 2011 at 00:18

    Well Thank you so much for appreciating :) Not that I am a poet or anything, Have just written a few poems... And that too 2-3 years back..!!! Will update the others soon.. Hope you read and like the other articles as well.. :) :)

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  3. Ragunathan19 June 2011 at 00:55

    Nice :)
    - Ragu

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  4. Sagnik Biswas19 June 2011 at 01:26

    Ajvad

    Good Going Bro :) Amazing. Simple. Catchy.

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  5. Anonymous19 June 2011 at 02:25

    LOVED IT....Totalllyyyy romantic..Mast che...<3!

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  6. Rajan19 June 2011 at 07:42

    superb dude.. :-)
    so there are many talents in SIBM-B...
    hope we can get a chance to learn from them a lot...

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  7. Smiling cherries19 June 2011 at 11:15

    loved the last line most :)well written !

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  8. Ajvad R19 June 2011 at 13:34

    Thank you so much Ragu, Sagnik, 'Anonymous', Rajan and Manasa.

    @Anonymous: You seem to be a mystery as of now, please quote your name. It becomes easier to identify :)

    @Rajan: Well it is a part of life here at SIBM B. I am sure you'll soon find your talent as well :)

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  9. Anonymous19 June 2011 at 18:45

    Miru!! :)

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  10. Ajvad R19 June 2011 at 20:06

    @Miru: Thanks again.. Somehow I thought it was you :)

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  11. Ankit mathur20 June 2011 at 00:24

    kya baat hai sirjee! nice one! :) looking out for some more now... :)

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  12. Anonymous20 June 2011 at 14:44

    awesome !!

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  13. urvashi21 June 2011 at 05:01

    very good aj... bahut achchi likhi hai... i specially love the last line ... very very touching...

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  14. Ajvad R23 June 2011 at 03:10

    @Mathur: Thank you so much :)
    @Anonymous(2): Thank you..!!! May I know your name please?
    @Urvashi: Thank you so much...!!! :)

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  15. kiran23 June 2011 at 12:11

    loved it Sir....
    Waiting for some more..

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  16. Pritiz2 August 2012 at 23:23

    Wonderful..!

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  17. NeelimaM20 April 2020 at 04:06

    Nice one 👍

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  18. Unknown23 April 2020 at 22:39

    Kya baat hai, my poet brother! Keep writing :-)

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